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Showing posts with label Making Lists. Show all posts

Monday, May 18, 2026

I Spy a Weasel: Overused Words

Crutch...filler...weasel...nuisance. These are names editors and authors give to words that are overused in a manuscript. See the long list below of words that often-not-always confuse the message, are redundant within a sentence, and/or are repetitive on the page. Since I've recently typed THE END on my fourth YA romance, I'm ready to do a search-and-destroy mission on these in the name of revisions. Each instance will get reviewed to see what works, what gets reworded, and what simply gets wiped clean.

Weasel Valentine Card by Emily Uchytil
Available at Wild Wallflowers Shop on Etsy


It's always interesting to see how many times a word/phrase gets used. Which of these will get the "weasel" award this time around?

A
Again, Almost, Always, And then, Anything, At last

B
Big, Both

C, D, E
Else, Enormous, Even, Every, Everything

F
Finally, Find

G
Giant, Grin, Great

H
Hard, Huge

I, J
Just

K
Know

L
Large, Like, Little, Long, Look

M
Massive, Maybe, Merely, Mostly

N
New, Nod

O
Of the, Of them, Once, Others

P
Perhaps

Q, R, S
See, Seem, Seems like, Shrug, Small, Smile, So, Something, Sometimes, Soft, Still, Strange, Strong, Suddenly, Surely

T
That, Then, There, There were, Thick, Thin, Thing, Think, Tiny

U
Understand

V
Vast,Very

W, X, Y, Z
Watch, Weak, Weird, Wide, Wonder

RESOURCES (with AMZ links):

1.) Stacia Leigh at Espial Design: What Good Are Crutch Words?

2.) Refuse to Be Done: How to Write and Rewrite a Novel in Three Drafts by Matt Bell

3.) Editing Made Easy: Simple Rules for Effective Writing by Bruce Kaplan



Wednesday, December 31, 2025

Fabulous Five: Favorite Reads for 2025

I finished the Goodreads Reading Challenge for 2025! Whoot! My goal was to read 100 books in twelve months and in usual fashion, I had to cram in thirty-five children picture books in two days for the win. I've picked out my five favorite picture books and five favorite reads from everything else. Here's the breakdown (AMZ links included):

BC Library's Mobile Stack
"New Picture Books"

CHILDREN PICTURE BOOKS

1.) Mina by Matthew Forsythe (My new favorite artist! Simply wonderful!)

2.) Fireworks by Matthew Burgess (Vibrant art and great story framing)

3.) When Beavers Flew by Kristen Tracy (Non-fiction)

4.) Our Lake by Angie Kang (A beautifully rendered book on grieving)

5.) How We Share Cake by Kim Hyo-eun (Sharing and math)

101 Books Read for 2025

POETRY

1.) A Bit Much by Lyndsay Rush

2.) You Just Wait: A Poetry Friday Power Book by Slyvia M. Vardel


NON-FICTION

3.) Just Write by James Scott Bell

4.) Whatcha Mean What's a Zine? by Esther Pearl Watson


GRAPHIC NOVEL

5.) Old Caves by Tyler Landry

Tuesday, May 27, 2025

Christmas Movies: Best of All Time

While writing a Christmas themed YA romance, I found myself in need of a list of Christmas movies that are loved and recognized by many to include in my story...my heroine is a Christmas movie buff. Coming to my rescue was this article by Entertainment Weekly: "The 23 Best Christmas Movies of All Time" by Chris Nashawaty and Kevin Jacobsen. For more detailed descriptions and the full article, do check out their site, otherwise, the numbered list is below with the movies I've seen in bold.

Drum roll, please! Ready?

The top 23 BEST OF ALL TIME movies, in order, are as follows:

1.) It's a Wonderful Life (1946)

2.) A Christmas Story (1983) 

3.) A Charlie Brown Christmas (1965)

4.) Elf (2003)

5.) How the Grinch Stole Christmas (1966)

6.) Love Actually (2003)

7.) Bad Santa (2003)

8.) The Muppet Christmas Carol (1992)

9.) The Year Without a Santa Claus (1974)

10.) Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer (1964)

11.) Home Alone (1990)

12.) Trading Places (1983)

13.) The Nightmare Before Christmas (1993)

14.) White Christmas (1954)

15.) Miracle on 34th Street (1947)

16.) Die Hard (1988)

17.) Scrooged (1988)

18.) National Lampoon's Christmas Vacation (1989)

19.) The Holdovers (2023)

20.) Gremlins (1984)

21.) Christmas in Connecticut (1945)

22.) Klaus (2019)

23.) The Santa Claus (1994)


A little internet research showed other movies out there that perhaps could/should be considered for "the best" list, and they are:


Polar Express (2004)

Christmas Eve (1915)

A Christmas Carol (1938 and 1984)

While You Were Sleeping (1995)

Family Man (2000)

We're No Angels (1955)

It Happened on 5th Ave (1947)

Auntie Mame (1958)

Holiday Inn (1942)

Mr. Magoo's Christmas Carol (1962)

A Christmas Tale (2008)

Jack Frost (1979)

The Rise of the Guardians (2012)


I haven't seen half of these on this page and don't remember all the ins and outs of quite a few. Hard to imagine watching these over the hot summer months, but apparently there is a thing called Christmas in July. Lol. A mind-bender for me in the PNW.

Anything missing that's worth a shout out? Let me know!

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Monday, December 16, 2024

Fabulous Five: Favorite Reads for 2024

I've read over 180 books for the 2024 Goodreads Reading Challenge, which is mostly due to picture books (125) and DNFs (17). And I get it -- "Did Not Finish" doesn't translate into "read" by most people. But for me, if I cracked it open and got as far as I wanted, then that's read enough for me. Personally, this challenge is not a competition, but a way of keeping books and TBR piles straight in my mind. It's a jungle up in there, folks. Lol. And I don't want to pick up the same book twice, because life's too short, ya'll.


With so many picture books under my belt this year, five favorites come to mind quickly. See below (AMZ links included).

TOP FIVE CHILDRENS BOOKS:

1.) The Invisible Boy by Trudy Ludwig (Teachers' Pick!)
4.) We Found a Hat by Jon Klassen (Editors' Pick!)
3.) Whopper Cake by Karma Wilson
4.) The Book with No Pictures by B.J. Novak (Editors' Pick!)
5.) What Do You Do with a Problem? by Kobi Yamada (Goodreads Choice!)




Picture books aside, eleven books in other genres were marked as 5-star reads, and it was a fun-less job choosing which to eliminate. But since this is called Fabulous Five for a reason, five it shall be. The following books made the cut for my 2024 ultimate faves:

1.) All around best-of-the-year goes to this MYSTERY...

by Lisa Jewell (Editors' Pick!)


2.) A MEMOIR worth remembering is...

by Jeanette Walls


3.) A POETRY with all the feels...

by Kelsea Ballerini


4.) A juicy SCREENPLAY...

by Arthur Miller (Best Seller!)


5.) A beautiful REFERENCE book about art, color, and nature...

by Patrick Baty et al.

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"Life's too short for regrets."

Monday, January 01, 2024

Fabulous Five: Favorite Reads for 2023

I've read over 300 books for the 2023 Goodreads Reading Challenge, which is a HUGE number for me mainly due to my Picture Book BINGO Reading Challenge last October. Due to the quantity, I easily picked out five of my favorites.




TOP FIVE CHILDRENS BOOKS:

1.) The New Rooster by Rilla Alexander
4.) Mel Fell by Corey R. Tabor
3.) I Want to Be Spaghetti by Kiera White-Ruiz
4.) Little Witch Hazel by Phoebe Wahl
5.) Burt the Beetle Doesn't Bite by Ashley Spires

 


Picture books and easy readers aside, I read so many good books that I honestly had a hard time choosing five favorites. But after some mulling, five books rose to the top:

1.) My all-time 2023 favorite read goes to this SPECULATIVE FICTION...

Ripe by Sarah Rose Etter


2.) Best read from a local PNW author is this MEMOIR...

Rough House by Tina Ontiveros


3.) Wonderful audiobook and great hook into a MYSTERY series goes to...

Out of Range by C.J. Box


4.) Best COMING OF AGE / DYSTOPIAN read goes to...

Deadlands by Victoria Miluch


5.) A gem! I highly recommend this CHRISTMAS ROMANCE audiobook...

Faking Christmas by Cindy Steel



Saturday, October 14, 2023

Trope-licious! A Mega List of Romance Tropes

Time for list-making again...and it's trope-licious!

Love 'em or hate 'em, tropes are those common, overused themes you find in stories and are well-known in the romance genre circles. I'll seek out or avoid books based on tropes, as I'm sure others do, too. Sign me up for road trips, fake relationships, enemies to lovers, and going undercover. So fun! But please don't put books in my Christmas stocking with wedding, age-gap, or fairy-tale retelling themes, or anything set in Nantucket. Lol. Weird, I know! But I'm pretty sure I already know the tone. Of course if I visited there, my mind could be changed. Until that day, I'll stick with my tried and true.

Now you, go forth and enjoy your tropes!

Tropes for Hanging Around for You by Stacia Leigh
Young Adult Romance

A newly abandoned girl hides the truth about a fatal accident, a grizzled biker she calls step-dad, and how she really feels about the new boy at school, a low-life spy! But really, who's spying on whom? 

 

FRIENDS FIRST

Friends to Lovers
You've Changed / Love on the Rocks
Belated Love Epiphany
Brother's Best Friend
Best Friend's Sibling
Marriage of Convenience / Marriage Pact
Pretend Relationships
Best Friend's Ex
Roommate Romance / Innocent Cohabitation
Secret Admirer


ENEMIES

Enemies to Lovers
Pen Pals
Rivals
Love / Hate
Revenge
Not Good Enough
Forced Proximity / Stranded
Blackmail


FAMILY

Suddenly a Parent
Single Parent
Orphan
Widow / Widower
Forbidden Love

Tropes for Burnout by Stacia Leigh
Young Adult Romance

"Suspended in grief, a down-and-out teen is forced on a therapeutic road trip. How can he hold onto the past when a feisty biker girl has him hanging on for dear life?"

 

OPPOSITES

Opposites Attract
Age-Gap/May to December
Grumpy-Sunshine
Bad Boy
Celebrity/Actor/Actress/Rock Star
Rich vs Poor / Unequal Social Status
Different Worlds
Want Different Things


OBLIVIOUS

Lovers in Denial
Sworn Off Relationships
Lost Memories / Amnesia


SECRETS

Secretly Rich
Secret Identity
Unrequited Love
Dark Secret
Disguise
Mistaken Identity
Secret Baby
Is All as It Seems?
Spying/Detective/Undercover
Love Triangle
Workplace Romance


MARRIAGE

Wedding Planner
Jilted Groom/Runaway Bride
Arranged Marriage
Soul Mates
Destined to Be Together

Tropes for Dealing with Blue by Stacia Leigh
Young Adult Romance

When quiet good-girl Suzy Blue plays "pretend" with the charmer next-door, she risks exposing a mortifying family secret.


TAKE TWO

Love Potion
Second Chances
Love at First Sight / Insta-Love
Holiday Flings
Reunion
Redemption


COMMITTMENT-PHOBE

Wounded Hero/Heroine (Emotional or Physical)
Sleeps with Everyone but You
Playboy/Rake in Love
Back with the Ex
What Happens in Vegas, Stays in Vegas
One Sided Romance
Afraid to Commit
Can't Say "I Love You"
All Grown Up
Long Distance Love


QUITE THE CHARACTER

Plus Size
Royal
Alpha Hero
The One That Got Away
Loveable Rogue
Ugly Duckling
Wallflower
Men in Uniform
Broken in Some Way
Bet
Blind Date
Fish Out of Water

QUITE THE PLOT / SETTING

Fairy Tale Retelling
Kidnapped
Adventure
Road Trip
Time Travel
Magical
Small Town
Location
Vacation

EXTRAS

Slow Burn
Matchmaker Gone Right or Gone Wrong
Against All Odds
Foodie


SUB-GENRES

Historical / Regency
Comedy / Drama
Mystery
Fantasy
Sci-Fi
Dark
Suspenseful
Western
Spiritual / Inspirational
Paranormal
LGBTQ+
New Adult / College
Young Adult (Ages 14+)


RESOURCES

Evie Alexander: 150 romance Novel Tropes
TCK Publishing: 14 Popular Romance Tropes
Brewing Writer: Ultimate Romance Tropes List: 28 Tropes + Book Recs!

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“The reason that clichés become clichés is that they are the hammers and screwdrivers in the toolbox of communication.”
― Terry Pratchett, Guards! Guards!

Thursday, December 01, 2022

December 2022 Reading Challenge: Christmas Book Binge Reading

On the first day of Christmas, my true love gave to me...
A partridge in a pear -- Wait. Scratch that.

How about instead, my true love gave to me a few really good books to read? While the French hens are co-mingling with the calling birds and the maids are busy milking around, I'll kick back with my feet up, cocoa on one side and my book pile on the other. Bliss. No phones, no computers 'cause my December will quite literally be booked. Let the Christmas-winter-snow binge reading begin!


The Primer Pile

CHILDREN'S PICTURE BOOK

1.) Over the River and Through the Wood by L. Maria Child
2.) Over the River and Through the Wood by Emma Randall
3.) Oliver Elephant by Lou Peacock
4.) The Most Wonderful Gift in the World by Mark Sperring
5.) The Bear Who Didn't Want to Miss Christmas by Marie Tibi
6.) Morris Wants More by Joshua Seigal
7.) Luke and Lottie: It's Christmas by Ruth Wielockx
8.) Red & Lulu by Matt Tavares
9.) Jingle-Jingle by Nicola Smee
10.) Always Everly by Nate Wragg
11.) Always Together at Christmas by Sara Sargent
12.) The Wee Christmas Cabin of Carn-na-ween by Ruth Sawyer
13.) A Whisper in the Snow by Kate Westerlund
14.) The Gift That I Can Give by Kathie Lee Gifford
15.) Ricky's Christmas Tree by Guido Van Genecht
16.) Minerva Louise on Christmas Eve by Janet Morgan Stoeke
17.) Little Santa by Jon Agee
18.) The Best Christmas Ever by Chih-Yuan Chen
19.) I'm Not Santa! by Jonathan Allen
20.) Grumpy Badger's Christmas by Paul Bright
21.) A Christmas Tree for Pyn by Olivier Dunrea
22.) A Magical Christmas by Claire Freedman
23.) Merry Christmas, Mary Christmas! by Laurie Friedman
24.) The Wishing Tree by Meika Hashimoto
25.) Holly & Ivy by Rumer Godden
26.) Construction Site on Christmas Night by Sherri Duskey Rinker
27.) A Thing Called Snow by Yuval Zommer
28.) The Tree That's Meant to Be by Yuval Zommer
29.) A Simple Christmas on the Farm by Phyllis Alsdurf
30.) Green is for Christmas by Drew Daywalt

ROMANCE

31.) Kiss the Girl by Melanie Jacobson
32.) Christmas at the Ranch by Anita Hughes
33.) Home for Christmas by Camilla Isley
34.) Winter's Fairytale by Maxine Morrey

MYSTERY
35.) The Overnight Guest by Heather Gudenkauf

DYSTOPIAN
36.) The Wolves of Winter by Tyrell Johnson


2022 Christmas good-read meter = 3 book(s) to recommend, so far.

Reading in Progress by TheGeekRetreat1

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Check out the 8 recommended Christmas/winter reads for 2020 here!
Check out the 3 recommended Christmas/winter reads for 2019 here!
Check out the 3 recommended Christmas/winter reads for 2018 here!
Check out the 8 recommended Christmas/winter reads for 2017 here!

Wednesday, June 22, 2022

June 2022 Reading Challenge: BINGO BLACKOUT!


Stacia Leigh's Cozy Reading Challenge
BINGO card

Half a year of reading with a BINGO here and a BINGO there, and I'm truly ready for a blackout. Found some favorites and even found a couple to buy for my shelf. I posted Amazon links to my recommended reads. Here's the breakdown:

R1C1: One-word title: CABLE by Jeffrey A. Pitts
R1C2: Set in the northwest: WONDERLAND POEMS by Matthew Dickman
R1C4: A Rec-o-mended book: EVENTOWN by Corey Ann Haydu
R1C5: Picture book: WAITING by Kevin Henkes
R2C2: By an independent author: WINDS OF SKILAK by Bonnie Rose
R2C4: Bottom of your To Be Read pile: WHERE THE WORLD ENDS by Geraldine McCaughrean
R2C5: Blue cover: BOOK ARCHITECTURE by Stuart Horwitz
R3C1: Little Free Library find: ALWAYS SOMETHING THERE TO REMIND ME by Beth Harbison
R3C4: A holiday story: HONEYMOON FOR ONE by Jennifer Peel
R3C5: Memoir: ABOUT MY MOTHER BY Peggy Rowe
R4C1: Set in nature: WILD BIRD by Wendelin Van Draanen
R4C2: A cultural find: AMAL UNBOUND by Aisha Saeed
R4C3: Made into a movie: GONE GIRL by Gillian Flynn
R4C4: YA romance by Stacia Leigh: DEALING WITH BLUE by Stacia Leigh
R4C5: A forgotten classic: YELLOW WALLPAPER by Charlotte Gilman
R5C1: Sci-fi or fantasy: DAUGHTER OF YS by M.T. Anderson
R5C4: An award winner: RUNNING DREAM by Wendelin Van Draanen 
R5C5: Art, poetry, or play: MOTHER by Maya Angelou

It was fun while it lasted. Now I'm going to run off and read whatever the heck I want. Enjoy your summer reads, my friends!

Friday, March 11, 2022

Greeting Card Challenges

Are you like me with a closet full of paper, glue, and other supplies that only see the light of day once a year? Do you order things online--like stickers and stamps--only to add them to a bin, out of sight, out of mind until the next crafting retreat? Are you a tool collector? A paper saver?

If you answered yes, we might be twinsies! I recently made a vow to only shop from my stash and not buy any more stuff (already broken thanks to finding a like-new Cuttlebug at the thrift store). But I'm making somewhat of a dent after learning of the Bring Smiles to Seniors nonprofit organization that accepts greeting card donations for seniors. It inspired me to GET BUSY because if I donate 2,500 cards I'll get "Angel" status. Uh, oh...a challenge! Lol. So far I've made a bag of 50, so I  have a ways to go yet...hence, the list of prompts below:


52 Weeks of Greeting Card Prompts
 

And I'd be remiss if I didn't turn it into a BINGO game. You know...design...fun stuff. If you're on Instagram and feel like participating, be sure to tag your projects with #greetingcardchallenge and/or #greetingcardbingo to join in the fun. See you there!

Greeting Card Challenge - BINGO
 
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"She aint nothin' but a goal digger." ~ @DMarzDesigns

Sunday, March 21, 2021

One Massive List of Character Flaws...Over 450!

Character flaws are not physical descriptions like being overly hairy, wearing dirty socks, or having one leg. Instead, character flaws are what drives characters through their story via their internal arc (If you want to dig deeper into this, check out a Discovering Story Magic workshop).
 
"Everyone has baggage and flaws. It's how they choose
to deal with it is their character." ~ Unknown
 
 The protagonist needs to overcome their flaw in order to succeed against the antagonist and to show internal growth by the story's end, so choosing the right flaw is very important. It helps define what your story is ultimately about.

A few might argue that some of the words on my list below defy my definition of not being a physical description, but they are the first step in offering a spark of inspiration or working as a starting point in a drill down by always asking the question...why? Why is the character a kleptomaniac? What do they need, fear, or believe that causes them to have this affliction? Is the disability of only having one leg a character flaw? No, but the character's feelings or beliefs about having one leg is, and this is what the hero needs to overcome when entering the ring with the villain.
 
Get your imaginations ready, and check out over four-hundred and fifty flaws below! Let the fun begin...

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ONE MASSIVE LIST OF CHARACTER FLAWS
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 A
Abandoned, Abrasive, Absent-minded, Abusive, Acts superior, Addicted, Addled, Adulterous, Aggressive, Aimless, Alcoholic, Aloof, Angry, Antisocial, Anxious, Apathetic, Arrogant, Artificial, Authoritarian, Avoiding, Awkward

B
Bad negotiator, Belligerent, Biased, Bigmouth, Bigot, Bitchy, Bitter, Blames others, Blunt, Boastful, Bold, Boring, Bossy, Boorish, Bratty

C
Calculating, Callous, Careless, Catty, Caustic, Center of attention, Changeable, Charmless, Chatter-box, Cheap, Childish, Close-minded, Clumsy, Coarse, Cocky, Cold-hearted, Combative, Competitive, Complacent, Compulsive, Conceited, Condemnatory, Confident, Confrontational, Conservative, Controlling, Covetous, Cowardly, Crafty, Crazy, Critical, Cruel, Cunning, Cynical

D
Day-dreamer, Defensive, Defiant, Delusional, Demanding, Denying, Dependent, Depressed, Desperate, Despondent, Destructive, Detached, Dictator, Difficult, Directionless, Dirty, Disabled, Disapproving, Dishonest, Disloyal, Disorderly, Disorganized, Disrespectful, Disruptive, Distant Distracted, Doesn’t listen, Dogmatic, Dreamer, Driven, Drug-addicted, Dull

E
Easily offended, Easily swayed, Egocentric, Egotistical, Emotional, Enervated, Entitlement, Envious, Erratic, Evasive, Evil, Excitable, Extravagant, Extreme

F
Facetious, Failure, Faithless, Fake, Fanatical, Fastidious, Fearful, Fickle, Fierce, Flaky, Flippant, Flirty, Follower, Foolish, Forgetful, Frail, Frivolous, Frugal, Fussy

G
Gloomy, Gluttonous, Goal-oriented, Gossipy, Greedy, Grim, Grumpy, Guarded, Gullible

H 
Harsh, Hateful, Haughty, Headstrong, Hedonistic, Hesitant, High social standing, High-strung, Holds grudges, Homicidal, Hostile, Hubristic, Humorless, Hypochondriac, Hypocritical

I
Idealistic, Ignorant, Ill-behaved, Ill-tempered, Immature, Impatient, Impious, Impolite, Impoverished, Impractical, Impressionable, Impulsive, Inadequate, Inattentive, Incompetent, Inconsiderate, Indecisive, Indifferent, Indulgent, Inefficient, Inept, Inexperienced, Inferiority-complex, Inflexible, Inhibited, Insecure, Insensitive, Insincere, Insulting, Intolerant, Irresponsible

J
Jealous, Judgmental

K
Killjoy, Kleptomaniac, Know-it-all

L
Lacking initiative, Lacking skills, Languid, Lazy, Lewd, Liar, Liberal, Listless, Lofty goals, Lonesome, Loud, Low social status, Low self-esteem, Lustful

M
Machiavellian, Macho, Malicious, Manipulative, Masochistic, Materialistic, Mean, Mechanical, Meddlesome, Meek, Megalomaniac, Melodramatic, Merciless, Messy, Meticulous, Mischievous, Miserable, Miserly, Mistrusting, Modest, Moody, Morbid, Mouthy, Murderous

N
Nag, Naïve, Narcissistic, Narrow-minded, Nasty, Naughty, Needy, Negative, Neglectful, Nervous, Neurotic, No direction, Non-adventurous, Non-receptive, Non-supportive, Nosy, Not detail-oriented

O
Obnoxious, Obsessive, Obstinate, Offends easily, Offhand, Opinionated, Oppressive, Ostentatious, Outrageous, Outsider, Over-achiever, Over-reacts, Over-critical, Over-sensitive, Over-ambitious, Over-confident, Over-dramatic, Over-emotional, Overly affectionate, Overly optimistic, Over-protective, Over-zealous

P
Paranoid, Partier, Party-animal, Passive, Patronizing, Perfectionist, Pessimistic, Petty, Phobic, Picky, Player, Playful, Plodding, Pompous, Poor planner, Poser, Possessive, Practical, Predatory, Predictable, Prejudice, Pretentious, Prideful, Prim, Prissy, Procrastinating, Promiscuous, Prudish, Psychotic, Puritanical, Pushy, Pyromaniac

Q
Quick-tempered

R
Rebellious, Reckless, Remorseless, Resentful, Responsible, Results-oriented, Ridiculous, Rigid, Risk-taker, Roguish, Rowdy, Ruthless

S
Sadist, Sadomasochist, Sanctimonious, Savagery, Scatterbrained, Scattered, Scornful, Secretive, Self-centered, Self-deprecating, Self-destructive, Self-giving, Self-important, Self-indulgent, Self-martyr, Self-righteous, Selfish, Selfless, Sensitive, Serious, Shallow, Shameful, Shameless, Short-tempered, Shy, Sickly, Skeptical, Sleazy, Slovenly, Slow, Sly, Small-minded, Smart Ass, Sneaky, Snobbish, Snoopy, Snooty, Soft-hearted, Somber, Sordid, Sore loser, Spendthrift, Spies, Spineless, Spiteful, Squeamish, Stagnant, Static, Status-conscious, Steals, Stingy, Stressed, Stubborn, Stupid, Submissive, Subservient, Superficial, Superiority-complex,
Superstitious, Surly, Suspicious

T
Tactless, Talkative, Tardy, Tasteless, Tedious, Temperamental, Tense, Thief, Thoughtless, Thrifty, Timid, Touchy, Tough, Traitor, Treacherous, Troublemaker, Truculent, Trusting

U
Unaccomplished, Unappreciative, Unbalanced, Unbending Uncaring, Uncharitable, Uncommitted, Uncommunicative, Unconventional, Uncooperative, Uncouth, Undependable, Undisciplined, Unethical, Unfair, Unfaithful, Unfeeling, Unfocused, Unforgiving, Unfriendly, Ungrateful, Unimaginative, Uninformed, Unintelligent, Unkempt, Unkind, Unlucky, Unmotivated, Unpredictable, Unreasonable, Unreliable, Unresponsive, Unrestrained, Unscrupulous, Unstable, Unsure, Unsympathetic, Untidy, Untrustworthy, Unworldly, User

V
Vague, Vain, Vengeful, Verbose, Vicious, Vindictive, Violent, Vision-less, Volatile, Vulnerable, Vulgar

W
Wasteful, Weak, Weak-willed, Whiny, Wild, Willful, Wimpy, Withdrawn, Workaholic, Worry wart, Wrathful

X

Y

Z
Zealous

Tuesday, September 15, 2020

Show Your True Colors: A Colorful List of Idioms

Color idioms, anyone? Look no further! I just spent a couple hours compiling as many phrases as I could find so you don't have to...thank-you-very-much and you're welcome.

 
RED
Caught red-handed: caught in the act of a misdeed
Seeing red: angry
Beet red: embarrassed and blushing
Red tape: Bureaucratic obstacles or tasks 
Taking the red-eye: late night traveling
Red light: stop
In the red: in debt, losing money
Roll out the red carpet: treat a person or group like royalty
The red-carpet treatment: give special treatment
Paint the town red: spending money on having a good time
Red-headed step-child: treated like the least favorite person
A red herring: a distraction
 
BLUE
Have the blues: melancholy
Feeling blue: sad, moody, depressed
Out of the blue: random chance, a surprise
Once in a blue moon: happenstance, something that rarely happens
Blue collar: manual labor, works with hands, wears overalls to work
Blue-eyed boy: a boy who is the favorite
Blue in the face: frustration
A blue-blood: aristocrat 
True-blue: loyal
A blue streak: moves fast
Blue cloud: profanity
Turn the air blue: saying a litany of swear words
A blue-hair: geriatric, old person
The blue hour: time when sun is below the horizon, either before sunrise or after sunset

YELLOW
Yellow-bellied: cowardly
To be yellow: coward
 
GREEN
Green with envy: to be jealous or envious
Green thumb: having a knack for growing healthy plants
Green light: permission to move forward, approval
Green backs: dollar bills, paper money
The grass is always greener: to covet, always wanting, never happy
Green around the gills: sick, queasy 
Looks green: sick, queasy
To be green: a novice, immature
Green-eyed monster: jealousy

ORANGE
Just peachy: everything is fine
 
PURPLE
Purple prose: flowery language that is excessive and draws attention to itself
Born in the purple: born into royalty

PINK
Tickled pink: delighted
Getting a pink slip: an official dismissal from a job
To see pink elephants: seeing imaginery things
Rosy outlook: optimistic
Rose-colored glasses: seeing things better than they really are
In the pink: in good spirits and good health

BROWN
Brown-nose: to curry favor by excessive obedience or attentiveness
A brown shirt: a Nazi 
Brownie points: an imaginary award for doing good deeds, a people pleaser
Brown-bagging it: bring your own
A brown study: lost in thought
 
BLACK
Black and blue: bruised
Black sheep: a person on the outs with their family
Black out: to faint
Black and white: clear and defined, plain and simple, easy to figure out
Black as night: dark, can't see
Black eye: a bruise around the eye 
Black gold: a valuable item despite its appearance
Black comedy: tragic yet funny
Pot calling the kettle black: hypocrisy
In the black: profitable, making money
A black day: bad things are coming
On the black list: a list of people on the outs
In a black book: rejected or out of favor
Black-balled: to be rejected in secret, a vote against
A black look: angry
Blackmail: a crime, demanding payment to keep secrets
Black-tie: formal dress, formal event 
Pitch black: dark, can't see
Black market: trading illegal goods

WHITE
White lie: a lie told to be polite or alter the truth enough to not get into trouble
White elephant: a possession that is expensive and hard to get rid of
White collar: high paying job, wear a suit to work, desk job 
White livered: cowardly
White as a sheet (ghost): pale, sickly
White flag: retreat, give up, admit defeat
White pain: shooting, hot, neuralgic pain

GRAY
Gray area: undefined and unclear 
Gray matter: brain or thinking
Shades of gray: ambiguous 
Has a gray cloud: pessimistic
 
GOLD 
Golden opportunity: a perfect chance
Good as gold: positive
Heart of gold: generous and kind
Worth your weight in gold: useful and helpful
The golden hour: when the sun is low on the horizon either after sunrise or before sunset
A golden boy: a popular, lucky, successful male
Taking the golden ticket: to swap one's soul for success, making a deal with the devil
 
SILVER
Silver screen: the film industry, Hollywood
Born with a silver spoon in one's mouth: born into a wealthy family
Silver lining: see the good in a bad situation
Silver-tongue: someone who says what others want to hear to persuade them 

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Sunday, June 28, 2020

What Good Are Crutch Words?

I found a great article called So, Um, You Really Need to Stop Using Crutch Words by Niti Shah about crutch words (a.k.a. filler words) and how they confuse what a speaker is saying by diluting the message, as well as making the person sound nervous and unsure. She says, "I'm identifying words that we often use but have no business being said out loud."

For speakers, sure, but this isn't necessarily true for fiction writers!


"I mean...I just...like you."
Artist Trading Coin by Stacia Leigh

So, what good are crutch words?

They may be considered unnecessary fluff to some, but they have their place. They're really good for implying a voice or a tone when writing unique characters. Each person in the story needs to sound like an individual and if all the characters have similar quirks or start their sentences with, "Actually," then the lines get blurred pretty quickly regarding who's who. Why do the teens sound like the adults? Why does the villain speak in the same manner as the hero? Is the alien talking or the captain of the ship?

Confusion will inevitably set in and that confusion lifts the curtain between the mist of the imaginary world and the concrete reality of text on the page. Authors need to keep the reader immersed in the story for it to be a satisfying read, and one small part of this process is to have characters that are easily identifiable by voice.

I've included a list of crutch words below for easy access. Mix and match and have fun. Do you have a favorite or a new word to add? Let me know!


STARTING A SENTENCE
* And (so)
* So
* Anyway(s)
* At the end of the day
* Okay
* Well
* Hey
* Like I said
* Like I was saying
* As I was saying
* Well...yeah
* Listen
* Tell me something
* You see
* I mean
* In fact
* To be honest with you
* Somehow
* In a weird way
* Regardless
* Nevertheless
* For what it's worth
* Now
* By the way
* No way
* All things being equal
* As a matter of fact
* As far as I'm concerned
* At this point (in time)
* Here's the thing
* I feel (that or like)
* I think (that)
* I believe (that)
* I might add
* In my (humble) opinion
* It seems like
* The most important thing is to
* The reason
* Time and time again


SOMEWHERE IN THE MIDDLE
* Just
* Almost
* Mostly
* Only
* Basically
* Actually
* Definitely
* Literally
* Really
* Very
* Truly
* Essentially
* Absolutely
* Seriously
* Totally
* Honestly
* Obviously
* Like
* Clearly
* Technically
* Great
* Fantastic
* Awesome
* Sick
* Excellent
* Wow
* Whoa
* Brilliant
* Definite
* Typical
* Uh
* Er
* Um
* Hmm
* Ah
* Uh huh
* And one more thing
* Maybe
* Sure (thing)
* Certainly
* A lot
* In any shape or form
* Slightly
* Simply
* Exactly
* Perhaps


ENDING A SENTENCE
* Right
* You know
* (You) Know what I mean
* (You) Know what I'm saying
* You get the idea
* And so on and so forth
* I guess (so)
* I suppose (so)
* Or something (like that)
* Stuff like that
* Or whatever
* You get me
* You feel me
* Are you with me
* Believe (you) me
* Believe it
* Got it
* Considering
* Here
* There


OTHER RESOURCES
* 298 Filler Words & Phrases That Rob Your Writing of Its Power by SmartBlogger
* Fill in the Gaps by FluentU
10 Crutch Words to Avoid Using When Speaking or Writing by Online-Spellcheck.com
* Don't Get Crippled by Crutch Words by TCK Publishing.com
* 30 Filler Words You Can Cut Out of Your Writing by GrammarCheck
* 25 Filler Words That Won't Get You Hired by BrandYourself

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"Don't be the crutch for someone who can walk." ~ LaShawn Henderson